So, here it is. The place where you tell me what I'm doing wrong, or what I'm doing right, if you're so inclined.

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

blah blah amv for character yada yada put it behind a cut.

( LOL EDWARD )

It's him, isn't it.

Rue.





I'm going to hack his system so hard he'll think he's using a FUCKING ROCK to type.



You're going down, Ryuuzaki Rue.



((Psi, if you can read this... do you want to be hacked or not? Because right now grown up!Edward is furious, and the only thing she can really do is hack the hell out of everything Rue touches. But if you don't want it, I'll think of an ic reason why she doesn't carry it out.))

Edward was playing with Ein on the Bebop.

She was a little bored.

And quite a bit hungry.

Her stomach growled.

Ed was lounging in the Bebop, singing a little song to herself. Ein, the dog, lay nearby.

Everyone else on the ship had gone off to do some bounty hunting, leaving Ed and Ein alone on the ship.

Ed's stomach growled.

Edward really likes it here!! She's making lots of new friends, and isn't bored at all anymore!!

YIPEEEE!!